英语写作描写文范例评析及欣赏

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My Dog，Romeo

My dog，Romeo，is the best pet anyone could have.He is beautiful and easy to care for.Playing with him is lots of fun.He always takes care of me.There isn’t a better pet anywhere.

Romeo is a beautiful tricolor Sheltie.He is mostly black with white and a bit of brown.Caring for him is easy because I simply have to make sure he has fresh water and food every day.I exercise him by throwing his toys.Romeo is a good pet because he is nice looking and doesn’t require much care.(www.xing528.com)

Romeo is lots of fun to play with.He loves to play catch.He follows me around the house with a toy and drops it on my foot so I will kick it.He can catch just about anything，but his favorite is chasing a Erisbee.I really have fun playing with Romeo.

Romeo takes care of me.He always follows me when I leave a room.When I am sitting on the couch he plops down right beside me.When we are outside in the woods he always makes sure that I keep up with the rest of the family.He always watches out for me.

As you can see，Romeo is a great pet.I am proud of him and he doesn’t require much care.Playing with him is always enjoyable.He watches over me and keeps me safe.Romeo is absolutely the best pet anyone could even have！

这是一篇描写动物的文章。作者从小狗Remeo的外表、爱好、品行等多方面进行刻画，全方位描写出一个有血有肉的小狗形象。读完此文，感觉文中的小狗栩栩如生，好似它就在眼前活蹦乱跳。文章结构清晰，逻辑严谨。开头总括，尾段总结，中间各段每段介绍小狗的一个方面，且主题句明晰。